Wednesday, July 22, 2020

gardening

Meet the gardening group. Some days Hayley, Archie sometimes Maky and Jordyn  and Johanna and I do gardening. Me.and Hayley started this gardening group. First we  were pulling out the weeds and then planting some seeds in the greenhouse . Now we are waiting for then to grow. Hopefully the seeds we planted are going to grow and we will have fresh vegetables.       

3 comments:

  1. Hi there Riya, I'm Abby a year 8 student at Yaldhurst Model School.

    I like the way you described everything clearly and the picture of you guys working is awesome and makes the blog very interesting.

    It looks like you guys have been doing lots of hard work. Around the start of the year I helped to plant some potatoes. What vegetables are you growing?

    Next time you could try to get more photos and do a collage or you could make a slide to put the text on so you could decorate it.

    Did you enjoy doing all that gardening?

    Kind regards,
    Abby.

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  2. Kia Ora!
    My name is Maddison I am a year 8 and I go to Yaldhurst Model School.

    Wow! what and amazing blog post you have created, I have really enjoyed that you have added in a nice photo of you all!

    I think that this blog is very eyectaching but maybe next time you could add in a slide with a series of photos and or videos so the readers can understand and see exactly what you guys have been doing for gvardenting around your school.

    Keep up the awesome work!
    -Maddie.

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  3. Hello Riya, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School!

    I liked the way you have lots of writing and you explained who was in the gardening group.

    This reminds me of the environment team in my class.

    To improve, maybe you could add a slide or a question at the end to spice it up.

    Do you have rotating schedules or something similar?

    Cya later Riya, keep it up!

    -Amelia

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.